My Favorite Class

All semester my students claim been written material paragraphs for me. They have learned how to economise topic destines and give birthing sentences and also terminal sentences. They have worked very voiceless. Now it is my turn to write a paragraph. hopefully Ill be able to write an interesting topic sentence that will catch the attention of my students. So, what should my paragraph be about? MRS. DS FAVORITE CLASS. My reading/writing class for the fall semester at the community college in 2008 was an beautiful class.How were they excellent? Well, first they always did their homework. or so of them had jobs to do during the day still they still found time to do their homework. They wrote in their journals and wrote a treat of paragraphs and then they rewrote the paragraphs. They were also excellent in another way. They really got along well with one another as a class. Some of them were very outgoing and some of them were quite faint but they respected each other and le arned a lot about each others countries as a result.Finally, they were an excellent class because they always made the teacher laugh. Even though they had worked hard all day, they came to class in a happy mood. If they were tired, they never acted crabbed about it or if they didnt feel well, they just kept beneficial on working. So, you can see that this really was an excellent class and I hope that they will all do well in the future. So, did Mrs. D. write a good paragraph? What was the topic sentence? Did all the sentences support the topic or were there some irrelevant sentences?And how about the reason out sentence? Did she repeat some interchanges from the topic sentence? Was it a good conclusion? Notice that she didnt indent the first word in the paragraph. The reason is that this is a typed paragraph and the paragraphs are separated by a space instead of making an indentation. Well, I dont think that its the greatest paragraph in the world but it expresses how I feel abo ut this class. I hope you all have a nice vacation and best wishes for your continued success in the coming year 2009 Sincerely, Mrs D.